tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1326740984433882985.post8980630201720263839..comments2023-10-25T04:54:25.779-04:00Comments on Belle's Butterfly Dreams: The Silent StormBelle's Butterflyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11687258623004829978noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1326740984433882985.post-64526925455477029442011-01-28T23:02:20.431-05:002011-01-28T23:02:20.431-05:00So glad you joined us! And even more glad you all ...So glad you joined us! And even more glad you all made it safely home. I have walked home several times at night after skidding off the road (back when i was a teenager). Scary!<br /><br />One tip: you switch your tenses from past to present back to past again. Try to stay in the same one through the whole thing. It's tough to do - believe me!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1326740984433882985.post-42896761923419473562011-01-28T20:36:49.760-05:002011-01-28T20:36:49.760-05:00This was my first time attempting as well, you did...This was my first time attempting as well, you did a great job explaining, how scary for you guys!Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10825508701189254822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1326740984433882985.post-52984811603107152212011-01-28T17:45:50.115-05:002011-01-28T17:45:50.115-05:00Visiting from TRDC - my first time as well! Great ...Visiting from TRDC - my first time as well! Great job! I could completely feel the longing for home.Catehttp://www.reallifewithkids.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1326740984433882985.post-41963339818858378192011-01-28T17:11:53.928-05:002011-01-28T17:11:53.928-05:00Good job! Did the tree crash down? Until I read th...Good job! Did the tree crash down? Until I read that this was non-fiction, I thought that maybe it had and that was the last sound she heard.<br /><br />Visiting from TRDC.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1326740984433882985.post-3371229379320746762011-01-28T14:46:10.638-05:002011-01-28T14:46:10.638-05:00Ohhh... great job! Visiting from TRDC.Ohhh... great job! Visiting from TRDC.Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03755605208695539726noreply@blogger.com